Story Competition English

Story Competition English

Prize20 million Alz

Ends 10 of August

How to enter

You must be registered
You have to be a guild member
one entry allowed

What you must do

Write a history story about your character.
make it interesting and based on Cabal enviroment.

This is a example of what a entry should be like
and i wish you the best.

Hello my name is Artel.
I come from a royal family that
used to have a castle on what i now called green despair.
As you can see i wear noble clothes and thier are none
I see in the land. I am a archer and have my pet cutie tai.

So I hope you understand what is needed

Deathlords entry

hi iam dl thise is my story
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one
day there was aboy name abdelrhman he bored of all online games and
want new game he want anew game he searched he find agame name cabal
cool name he download it and join in world of enjoy and risks when he
start he was litle noob but he found some one with great heart his name
was oh yeah he give him 100k and join him in aguild was name russition
in thise guild he found his first familey and meet agreat man his name
was artel after that he reached 40 he was want to get eof+5 no one want
to give him the goold but theartel give him 6kk more than 2kk he
thanked him and become very good freinds
artel and oh yeah was
freinds and so they become 3 of them was the greatest freinds then when
dl get lvl 50 he get alot qwets and it was big proplem and it take 5
days to do all thise quests and
when he finished it there was last
quest quest who will chagne his life for ever when he did his quest he
get astrong power and and new astral bike no one see be fore and huage
armor and he gain alot powers and new magices and become lvl 500 wowow
and the 3 freinds gain all thise powers and be come the kinghts of cabal
and suddenly some thing happened all acounts has logged in
and
all mobs disbeard and all mobs and wariors and mobs gone in new land
name the great battle the 3 freins be come the leadears of the great
army and artel and oh yeah was more stonger than death lord they make
the army of players
all arcers have sated on montain and the 3
comders go with 3 astrals bike and all army follow them and inter the
massvie army of moobs and there was about 5kk of moobs and only 2kk
players aalot of the knights and archers dies but artel new bower was
regive he give half of hise hp to re life the died army and army weake
up and start killing mob oh yeah and artel and dl diseded to go and
kill the bossss he disrtoed half of cabal they went there but he was
very big to fight them the hall arny he destroy it with hise feet mobs
and players then oh yeah use his power to make the big boss smaller and
he still biger than them he was as big as building when h yeah small it
and they start to atatck him all them atacks didnt scatch him and then
he strick dl and oh yeah with great power but artel stand between it
and dl
he died but before he died he sayed to dl u are my best freind
dl cryed and oh yeah use his last power to dl and sayed be strong young boy and he died also dl strick him with all he have
but
he was still strong the strick was so strong he cut the boss arm and he
strick dl with anther hand dl fell on the land and sayed there is no
hope but he remperd what his 2 freinds say be strong alighting strick
dl and he start toreseve his power he made his 2 freinds back from died
and hall armys the 3 freinds and the army fusion in one boody and he
was big he fight with the moob
and he defeat him but the 3 freinds
has used all there powers so they no like leaders but like freinds and
all people want to make some thing good ffor themthey make 3 states
near to each outher and write on it true freinds

here is mine

Long ago there was human's kindom in a land called Bloody ice ... people was happy ...enjoyining thier time ,having welfare all Scenes of happinss were obvious ..childerens playing in the garden ..making a satues of snow in the beautiful land of bloody ice..etc

humans enjoyed thier life untill an evil creature appeard ..in the land of Mutant foresst a strang creature called cabal showed up in mutant foresst and he wanted to distroy every thing makes ppl happy ...his aim was lord ship of the whole world ...he invaded most of the worlds untill he came to bloody ice ....
while cabal was planing to invade bloody ice (the only world that isn t under cabal control yet ..a strange profet showed up in the bloody ice kindom he warned the king that strang,powerful creature is planing to invade his kindom ,,the king took min in silent then he oredered 5 knights to go and see what is the situation out side bloody ice land ... but sadly couple days passed and the 5 knights didn t come back . the king was sure that something dangour will happen so ... he ordered to prepare for fight..two armies was ready for fight capella and procyon they were allies ..they forced cabal and they could defeat him and his army ,, it was a great victory ppl celebrated and back to thier normal life ,, but bad ppl r every were ,, king's ministers wasn t good people they wanted to kill the king and take over the kindome and sadly .. they could kill him and and unfortunatly capella joined them after the king's death ..but procyon.. procyon was still have some loyalty to thier king after his death ..procyons intended to revenge for the king's death they was mad at capella and thier leaders .. procyons have been punished for thier Disobedience by kicking them out of bloody ice ...one thing i didn t mention .. before the king died he could find a true sildier who was brave ,honest love his people and seeking thier protection this guy called DemonSoul and now after the king died DemonSoul insisted to revenge and he was certain that he willn t be able to do this alone .. so.. he asked some friends to aid him in the procyon leardership those friends were (Artel,shoty,Blood and nightpr1nce) they could regroup again and prepaired for a new fight ..but this time will be against capella ...some brave people leads the procyon's attack ..people don t fear death they were from silence guild ^_^
now both of cappela and procyon r ready for the fight in the land of terra glarious

i all im Kinght Of the Round

befor i type my story i will say One word too my Best Friend {Jingelz} ====>Thanks Alot for all Help <===== and thx all guild frist timei play this game i think it for people who can buy item only from cabel Shop but now when i be lvl 45 i think this game for all i play many Online Game Like 2moon and zxonline and css and rapzela and slikroad ..ETC. now
im worrir many people tell me worrir suck but i never hear too them and i lvl my worrir and make him lvl 45 and worrir have great skill . when i was lvl 1 i was bloody Ice i met there jingelz he give me 100k then after 1day he give me 300k and he give me many items and he help me in quest but i have problems people Keep ks cuz im noob tly i hate this game but when i Chat whit gild i never feel brode cuz people in guild are funny and they all Kind help me alot .i love do quest in dester hiden quest so coool item and ALZ last night i earn 500k when i done my quest so cool rly and i love this game Because my all family (silenec) help me in all quest i have Thanks all for read my Story..... i know that bad story

Thanks for our guild master who hold this great competition and the guild members who support me!!!!!!!!
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Once upon time there was a little boy who lived in a town called Bloody ice. he never know why they called it bloody because his mother never let him out the city .
One day at the night he heard a woman screaming in the officer place he come out to see what is happening he heard that the woman lost her daughter outside the city and the officer said that monster again!!!
The boy know this voice he look from the window its his mom and the lost girl is his sister
The boy said what monster!!. The officer told him that there is another world out side the city which is controlled by monsters and there leader who hates humans.
The boy run out the city and reach the place which they are talking about he found a lot of skeletons and swords from the warriors who want to kill that monster
suddenly…………………………………………………..a huge monster appears it was so scary with big red eyes; and what is that its holding his sister .
The little boy thought fast he take a piece of wood and use it as a shield and bring a broken sword from the ground he but the sword in the monster leg the monster dropped his sister because of the pain the boy take his sister and run to the city.
There he didn’t talk about what happened because it was so scary but in the next morning there is some body knocking his door he opened and found an archer holding his bow and told him that his name is (Artel) and he and his team is fighting the evil outside and he want him in his guild .
The boy thought about what happened to his sister and accept the offer.
Year after year the little boy become a warrior and he learned some skills from the instructor in his city he hold a shield and become a force shielder and the guild called him (Flash).
And one day his leader (Artel) said:'' that’s enough we must kill the monsters leader'' the hole guild agreed about that idea…….
The guild go to the monsters leader in the undead tower at the undead ground . Artel said: ‘’here is the plane I will shot the monster with arrows in its eyes and Borg (wizard) fix him in the ground by the power of ice and you flash you will protect us buy the power of your shield and you Jinglez(bladder) will get his head off.
So after a great battle they killed the monster leader and Flash said :’’yes its the end’’ …………. but Artel said:’’ you will never get it it will never end’’
Then Artel shouted :’’ok guys we have a new mission in the green despair forest!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?
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Thanks for reading my long story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sry guys i guess i am not a good wrieter soo i guess ill be the unknown guy who came frome nowher and u guys all have a good stories and GL all
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Long ago the king of the royal family from Desert Scream fought the evil of Nevareth and cleanse the land

Now, almost a thousand years later, Nevareth is once again crawling of Evil; fostering the prince that would be the king to once again cleanse the land, His name is Jinglez.........
(tried to make it short and simple XDD)

Oh my fucking god i wrote two storys and lost them both -.-
im so pissed off GAHHH!!!

what i do is copy it before i send it.

GAHH 3 i fucking give up -.-

Hy Every One this is My Story I made It Like Comic Book I Hope u like it






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I didnt have time to make it more intersting cuz i had Vacation and didnt
noe about that event .... I hope u like it

closing it early as will be busy next few days
congrads to flashlight for winning the contest